AMC Web Forums

Other topics => Music / Movies => Topic started by: Quakis on April 07, 2004, 03:45:59 AM



Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on April 07, 2004, 03:45:59 AM
Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger, but let the temple bells ring.

Shine forth, the charms of sacred birds.
Shine back, the fields of enchanted herds.

Give the golden charms of the almighty quest.
and leave behind the bad, and keep the best.

PhenioX Sing!
Pheniox Sing!

Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 07, 2004, 03:50:08 AM
Really Nice my friend ;) (y)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: LAW on April 07, 2004, 04:14:30 AM
It is ok ........ when I close my eyes :D j/k


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 07, 2004, 08:09:44 PM
Nice! (y) both of them :D I'll post some of my own lyrics... sometimes ;)

One remark:

Quote
You're not getting my attention (at all)

change that to: " you're not at all getting  my attention " :P
 


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 07, 2004, 09:11:18 PM
Diamondback
©2003-2004, Blaster :P

Blind I am to the world outside
Dumbly I sit, and dumbly I sigh
Begging to question the end of my life
Firmly I think and firmly I try

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see the light but am pained
It hates me
It hath me
It holds me
It loathes me

Resting beneath me it rattles its tail
Warning it gives and warning prevail
But not for long does last this tale
My body, it hurts and my body, it'll fail

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see light but I am pained
It hates me
It hath me
It holds me
It loathes me

And I tremble
And I shake
Hoping it's a dream
I try to wake
But to no avail
Does this curse lift
I'll avenge my death
I'll cause it a rift

Shanketh its head I do with sharp rod
The head, it will shake, the head, it will bob
The deed is now done and my heart quicker throbs
Wearily I bawl, wearily I sob

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see light but I am pained
It hates me still
It hath me still
It holds me still
It silenced me


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 07, 2004, 10:00:09 PM
I'll try to post mine here but they are way too sad and sick :S  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 07, 2004, 10:10:37 PM
Quote
^ Just do it man :)
Seconded.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 07, 2004, 10:17:19 PM
Okay. One made by myself ;) :


I feel empty
I feel cold
I feel like I was frozen
for ages in the snow
Night makes me scared
it only makes me even more depressed
The wind is screaming out
I wanna shout real loud :
" I wanna leave forever
the other side must be better
than this one
because I feel so fucking alone
Tomorrow I'll be gone
I'll leave my world of sorrow
for once "
Death wants to give me her sytche
saying that I'll be fine
when I rip it off my spine
My rests will be consumed
by the wolves of night
because .. well ...
Can't you understand ?
I am already in Hell


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on April 07, 2004, 10:21:39 PM
Quote
Nice! (y) both of them :D I'll post some of my own lyrics... sometimes ;)

One remark:



change that to: " you're not at all getting  my attention " :P
Nope, we've tried that, but the boys who are writing the music for the song didn't agree with that sentence so we switched it back to (at all)[/i] :D (y)

EDIT Good lyrics Steph :)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 07, 2004, 11:22:29 PM
Nice lyrics Steph and Rob! Damn I really like them, they should really be used somewhere, cause they sound really professional (also I know what you mean Highwire in both of them, such people annoy me too). Maybe I should also try and write something? :P


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on April 07, 2004, 11:39:02 PM
Quote
...cause they sound really professional...
Heh, thanks :) But don't worry... They ARE being used :D I just recieved the intro solo from the music writers :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 07, 2004, 11:41:58 PM
I have almost 20 texts like that on the go and don't know what to make with them but I am glad you liked it ;)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on April 08, 2004, 12:58:41 AM
Dam they are nice (y)

 


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 08, 2004, 01:59:21 AM
I started writing something, but it's a real crap, I think it would be better for me to write in Polish but then you guys won't understand it so I ust won't write untill I'll have some real inspiration :P


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: LAW on April 08, 2004, 02:38:48 AM
^ same as me - I wrote reall good stuff but in polish .......


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Guid on April 08, 2004, 04:31:59 AM
heres something:


The emigrant, crosses all the seas,
seeing that in the world the things are unequal,
remain back all the material goods,
racism and the laughter is  in mouths of ignorants.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 08, 2004, 05:33:47 AM
I only write when I feel inspired so its something real.  Nice message Quid ;)
 


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 08, 2004, 09:16:11 AM
I just finished this one. I just don't know why I am posting it btw  :-?


People say I lie
when I say I wanna die
but its fucking true
I am feeling so blue
and still didn't find a clue
to get better.
My friends try to lift me up
but death is what I only think about
My mind really needs peace
and that I can't give
so I need help
if you wanna see me live
I am always in danger with myself
the knife is challeging me in the shelf
I try to think of something good
but I am not in the mood
I try to make my thoughts clear
but I am afraid that death is near
I am tired of feeling fear
my poor eyes are only tears
I would like to take all these pills
so I would forget that I am so ill
but it doesn't matter what I think or do
that's how I feel
maybe it's sad but it's for real


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 08, 2004, 05:34:41 PM
Quote
Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger, but let the temple bells ring.

Shine forth, the charms of sacred birds.
Shine back, the fields of enchanted herds.

Give the golden charms of the almighty quest.
and leave behind the bad, and keep the best.

PhenioX Sing!
Pheniox Sing!

Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
i really like it (y) :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: James on April 08, 2004, 05:44:01 PM
I'm moving this topic because it's related to music (Well at least all the song lyrics are)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: LAW on April 08, 2004, 05:51:23 PM
No no no. Peotry isn music man. Lyrics are supposed to be song but it is still literacy no music. Lyrics differs from epics but man .....


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 08, 2004, 09:28:46 PM
Damn there are quite some hidden writing talents within the duke community :) (y) I'll make this topic sticky.
So all self-made lyrics you wanna show can be posted here :D
 Keep ' em coming!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on April 08, 2004, 09:34:07 PM
Maybe you should rename the topic too. :)

-Rusty Nails


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 08, 2004, 11:08:08 PM
Quote
but its fucking true
I am feeling so blue
Lol :D Why blue? :P
Anyway, I really like that lyric, hope it isn't about you pal ;)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 08, 2004, 11:12:11 PM
Quote
Why blue?

"blue" is term used by people who has depression. It's hard to explain though  :-?

Quote
Anyway, I really like that lyric, hope it isn't about you pal

Thanks Alex ;) . Now who knows it's about me  :-?  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 09, 2004, 02:10:20 AM
Nah, don't kill yourself - let the professionalists do it :P Come on man, don't worry be happy! ;)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 09, 2004, 02:23:20 AM
It's funny because I started a thread like this in General Messages and it was shot down.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 09, 2004, 02:31:21 AM
It was? Well I'm not mod at that forum. I guess different mods have different tastes... :)

Anyway you write some good stuff. You also have written music around them?


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 09, 2004, 03:02:07 AM
Quote
It was? Well I'm not mod at that forum. I guess different mods have different tastes... :)

Anyway you write some good stuff. You also have written music around them?

I have the idea of how I want the music to sound around them, but the trouble is actually writing the music. I can't write notes and stuff, nor can I play music. The mods weren't really what shot it down, either. It was a matter of a few people acted pretty harshly toward the concept of the thread (mainly James and Mikko).


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 09, 2004, 08:53:16 PM
Damn I only see this all the lycrics now :oops: But damn, I must say some have really talent with writen lycrics! I especially love how Stephano and Highwire write those lyrics (y)

Well, I make songs on keyboard, based on a way there is txt, but the problem is...I never have write them :P Maybe you guys have some tips for me for writen good lycrics?? :rolleyes: :smoke:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 10, 2004, 08:08:08 AM
Poem i read at my brothers funeral.......

I longed to see my God,
my God i could not see.
I  Yearned for peace and happyness,
but they eluded me.
I whent and helped my neighbour,
and i found all three.



Oh and its not my poem :P i didnt make it up or something lol.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 10, 2004, 09:31:24 AM
^
It has a nice message ;)
and here's another one from me :


My life became a blackout
and whatever I try doing
it has no way out
I look for light
but I am just to weak to fight
I open the window
the wind hits my head
Why I am so bad ?
Maybe its me
Maybe its the world
who knows ?
One day I'll be fine
it may take a year or two
Happiness will be again in my sight
even if the path is way too tight
I must fight
If I ever wanna see the light again
Hope my mind can understand
what I want to say
until then,
I cry and cry
while my days are going by


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on April 10, 2004, 09:35:45 AM
Quote
Maybe you guys have some tips for me for writen good lycrics?? :rolleyes: :smoke:
I have suggestion: Make sure you experience something extremely sad & tragic, then pick up your pen and right it down. ;)
(Okay that was partially a joke, but it's still some truth in it)

-Rusty Nails


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 10, 2004, 09:37:56 AM
^
That's what I do so that's why mine are always sick :S :(  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 10, 2004, 10:25:58 AM
I really like your latest one stephano ;) its great!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 10, 2004, 11:47:39 AM
Thanks :) . I dunno why but writing helps me to forget how shit life is sometimes :S


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 12, 2004, 04:52:46 PM
Based on this pic:
(http://dynamic5.gamespy.com/~amc/forums/uploads/post-2-1081726579.jpg)

The Sangy supa rap :D

Yo yo yo, we're gonna part like we're in belgium

Cuz y'all know, I moderate da butterflies,
and ya know why, too much spam is what I despise
so stick that up yo ass, I'm your supa moderator
 much better then that terminator,
yo ol'chap James meet your exterminator
Stop posting my pic, it's making me sick
why keep posting it, hey yo what's the motherfucking kick
Just becouse I have glasses on it doesn't mean I'm clever
working on another project.... yeah whatever

Chorus:
I'm da supaah moderator, I'm the newest building God,
bow down to ur creator, I'm a playah and I'm hot  ( 2 times)

watchin' another spammer, making stupid stupid posts,
Highwire, Willy, mrline and you know what I hate the most?
my forum they bash, treating it like trash but..
When we play online with dukesterx they still want me to host
Yo, I'm only 12 years old, but I'm a motherfucking pimp
living here in belgium, yes I know I look like a whimp
but once you get to know me ya wish ya never had
Becouse you can't beat me, not even with a series like red
Supah stands for superior, check the interior
of ur computer cuz you're the one that's inferior

Chorus

:D


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 12, 2004, 04:55:21 PM
dame that rulze :D (y)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 12, 2004, 06:28:20 PM
You guys haven't heard the recorded version yet :mrgreen:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on April 12, 2004, 06:37:46 PM
Quote
Based on this pic:
(http://dynamic5.gamespy.com/~amc/forums/uploads/post-2-1081726579.jpg)Just becouse I have glasses on it doesn't mean I'm clever
working on another project.... yeah whatever
I liked that part. :D

Awesome, you gotta record it. ;)

-Rusty Nails


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on April 13, 2004, 01:37:00 AM
I heard it and I love it, very creative, literally :D :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 13, 2004, 01:41:02 AM
Yeah a CD feauturing that song would sell zilions of copies world wide ;)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 13, 2004, 01:58:37 AM
We might post a link on AMC soon with the song. Not sure tho (we don't have a site, and it's waaayyyy to big to upload here) :)

Quote
I heard it and I love it, very creative, literally

Lol thanks ;) But that txt was wrotten in a bang, and the music is simple as hell :P So it's not *that* creative lol. But thanks that you think so :lol:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 13, 2004, 02:03:04 AM
I'll ask Willy wether he wants to upload it to da redsite ;)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on April 13, 2004, 02:17:54 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEAAAAAAAAAT :lol: :D  :lol: :D  :lol: :D  :lol: :D  :lol: :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on April 13, 2004, 02:31:03 AM
And it like, everytime I turn around, I fall in love and my heart beats down... :P not done yet!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 13, 2004, 03:59:38 PM
Yay you can now download the rap from my site :D William uploaded it :)

anyway:

click here to get it :D (http://www.geocities.com/redepisode/supasangyrap.zip)

(EDIT: if it doesn't work you can allways get it via my site - link is in my sig. Look in "other duke stuff" section ;) )


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 13, 2004, 04:03:03 PM
YAY! its really funny :D
Sometimes the link is unavalable :( just keep trying untill its avalable for you :P mostly it is.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 13, 2004, 11:51:39 PM
Check it out peeps! It's worth it. (mrline does the rap, me the keyboard :mrgreen:)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 14, 2004, 12:08:49 AM
And reply would be cool too btw :cool:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on April 14, 2004, 01:44:44 AM
All I can say is: ROFLMAO :lol: (y)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on April 14, 2004, 02:06:38 AM
Murder: By Quakis

People ignore me. What have I done?
They walk past me, but all I do it run.
Is it bad? Or is it a nightmare?
What have I done, stoping people to stare?
Wait!
The bars in front of me.
The cockroaches and bugs roaming free
The chains on my arm,
Lock so tight im not calm.
I remember, Prison!
Could it be Murder?


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 14, 2004, 03:42:23 AM
^
Damn that's the kind of stuff I really like........ gonna post one more from me later since I finished 2 today.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on April 14, 2004, 06:09:40 PM
Death -Reapers

Shadows roam, for lurking past
Demons run, far and fast
Look out, for the acienct death
Or confront him now, the guy with no breath
Its can't be him?


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 15, 2004, 01:13:11 AM
*make yourself safe before reading this one :eek: *

Dad isn't here
My mom is not too
So my mind says to me :
"Go ahead there's nobody watching you"
I head to the kitchen to search
for the last thing of my satanic research
What death would use to make it fast and deep ?
The answer is right there in the sink
...just everything that I need
The knife is there and makes me to think
"It has been my best friend
since its the only,which understands
what I am going through"
So I place it deep in my arm
it's so sweet as I start to bleed
Red tears start to drop
slowly in the kitchen's floor
making a strange draw
which reminds me of death
It's the way I found to forget this
not fair but I forget I am so sick
that I live in despair, that life is just a miss
People tell me to stop
but its easy to say and hard to support
these damn things that life just brought
I trow the knife away and head to my room
at least there I have peace
in my own scary doom
:eek:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 15, 2004, 01:18:32 AM
Hey Stephano, U checked our song? :P It will make you maybe a bit more happy heheh :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 15, 2004, 05:06:30 AM
^
started the download just now ;)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 15, 2004, 01:51:21 PM
Quote
*make yourself safe before reading this one :eek: *

Dad isn't here
My mom is not too
So my mind says to me :
"Go ahead there's nobody watching you"
I head to the kitchen to search
for the last thing of my satanic research
What death would use to make it fast and deep ?
The answer is right there in the sink
...just everything that I need
The knife is there and makes me to think
"It has been my best friend
since its the only,which understands
what I am going through"
So I place it deep in my arm
it's so sweet as I start to bleed
Red tears start to drop
slowly in the kitchen's floor
making a strange draw
which reminds me of death
It's the way I found to forget this
not fair but I forget I am so sick
that I live in despair, that life is just a miss
People tell me to stop
but its easy to say and hard to support
these damn things that life just brought
I trow the knife away and head to my room
at least there I have peace
in my own scary doom
:eek:
wow that's really heavy man  :eek: You don't really cut yourself eh?  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 15, 2004, 03:10:59 PM
My turn.
This is rite of the top of my head so ur getting it fresh :D

I dont care
I dont care what you think
I dont care
I dont care how your looking a me
I dont care
Why should I? who are you anyways?
Walking in your judgemnt suit, some typical mindrift, after complex
Reasons to make people feel shame?
Take a pill, reality rocks, your neighbour isnt the kitchen bitch, watch your mouth.
Here I will sit feeling the evening truth, A soft brease brushes over me at dawn and I draw in the sand.
Truly I fail to understand the world of death and "Hate your neighbour" Times where people of Love preach a life of death and our leaders throw there weapons in there enimies eye while they sleep.
Cause I live in a country where Muslems and Christians meet in peace and find fullfillemt in loving there brothers and sisters in creation.
I look at my TV and see millions in death crying "Why me" and I think, "why not me?" where was I when the wars started? how is it so hard to spread the peace?
The answers written at home, over our fences and our bariers lies anather heart,
It crys out "Why not me?" "Where was I when the wars started?" I Care but I cant make a diference.
The diference isnt who you save its who you love, open the doors and let your candles burn.
I Sit and draw in the sand cause I fail to understand.
I get up and move to the shore and cry out to God, A cool swift brease meats me with the a gleaming sun slowly seating and it tells me of a man who can make a diference. What a man that man must be i think, Where was he when the wars started? but the truth was harder to bear, An unthinkable answer, I stand in shock and or and see the man.
That man is me.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on April 15, 2004, 07:28:08 PM
Mrline: I don't expect him to, Its just the way he feels and he rights it down as a poem.....I hope he DOES NOT do it though :eek:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 15, 2004, 08:28:34 PM
^ I'm sure he won't do anything stupid and will feel better soon ;)
BTW:
Stephano - 'nice' lyric, I really would like to hear that as a song too ;)
Will - also good, altought it should be 'meet' not 'meat' right? ;) Cause it sounds knda funny... "where Muslems and Christians meat in peace" :P
And finally M & Ms - damn that song really rules lol :D


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 16, 2004, 12:16:38 AM
^
Thanks! :mrgreen:
And not bad lyrics Willy, but I didn't understood everything since my english isn't that good :oops:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 16, 2004, 02:01:59 AM
Quote
You don't really cut yourself eh?

Nope not yet :S


Quote
I'm sure he won't do anything stupid and will feel better soon

I really hope so

Btw I got your guys song and damn I liked the "special effects" a lot ;) and Will nice one (y) even if I will need to search for some words in a dictionary  :-?  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 16, 2004, 04:03:26 AM
whitch words dont u understand?. I spelt them rong most likely :D


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 16, 2004, 04:31:12 PM
Yeah lots of  them are spelled  Wrong :)

But I like it it has a good message (y)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Mblackwell on April 16, 2004, 08:54:27 PM
a song about a girl...

VANILLA AND CREME
come back around
lay your head down
you've been running for so long

burning bright
strangeness into night
lost and loveless, hanging on

quietly
hanging on to me
waiting for a feeling, a morning song

waiting for dawn

I don't wanna feel
and I don't wanna breathe
you say to yourself it's all you need
a strange picture window show

Now you'll never see
and now you'll never know
vanilla and creme like seeds you sew
this day's gone so slow

on your way
like never again today
don't you know that you belonged

take your place
awake in outerspace
telling the world that you're so strong so strong

like velvet clenching on
don't wait until it's gone

I don't wanna feel
and I don't wanna breathe
you say to yourself it's all you need
a strange picture window show

Now you'll never see
and now you'll never know
vanilla and creme like seeds you sew
this day's gone so slow

take my heart
screaming too far
you tell yourself you're lost where you are

Still I don't wanna feel
and I don't wanna breathe
you say to yourself it's all you need
a strange picture window show

Now you'll never see
and now you'll never know
vanilla and creme like seeds you sew
this day's gone so slow

I don't wanna feel
I don't wanna breathe
vanilla and creme

-Jonathan Smith


She doesn't know it's about her... yet she said it gave her chills because it completely reminded her of herself...


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 17, 2004, 07:21:17 AM
^
you should tell her ;)

Wanna know what depression is and what it does to you ? Read my latest one :S

Depression is a pretty grim thing
It keeps slowly filling your mind
with sad and sick thoughts
which slowly you can't support
so you stop living
and start screaming
everyday and everynight
is a battle to fight
each day you're alive its a win
because it shows you're still strong
but if you let depression take you wrong
you will meet a pretty dark side
where you can't come back
even if you in hell you beg  for that
even if you become mad and your family really sad
Depression is only dispair and torture
its a really big misfortune to meet her
and its worse when she comes with Death
since it can open a fend in your life, a fend in your mind
and you will just be another blind
fighting daily with your inside
and what it's worse : Alone
Depression is just a big shark who can bite really deep and sharp
You don't need to be young or old
to know how scary she flows
in your brain, in your mind
in your veins, in your eyes
It can start from nowhere
and take you really far so far there's no way back
to return from her doomed lair  
With depression you only isolate yourself
With depression you only think about the sharp blade in your shelf
It makes you take all those pills
to recover your will and to forget how ill and sick you feel
Whenever you meet her ring your mind's alarm
to get safe from all kinds of harm
it the best you can do
and remember that this depeneds only on you !


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on April 17, 2004, 07:59:32 AM
I've written some lyrics and poems in my past, but they're pretty much all washed away, I can't write anymore, this is all I can remember from what I've written:

At dawn in early may, I unlocked the door to pray. (:))

And-
A distant voice to rely on - crucified in all my thoughts.

That's all..

-Rusty Nails


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 17, 2004, 08:15:57 AM
Transformers

Thy robots in disguise
Look around you see one cookin fries
while the decipticon cooks up another lie

Megatron hit ya like wonton sushi
a gangsta wit a uzi
Mega Arm Nuke people screamin
"what da fuke?"
be like "Luke ya go the force"

and the peoples voice is hoarse
and people are in remorse cuz LA is gone cuz of a nuke
people sayin "man dis situation is gay"

StarScream more like Whip Cream, shakin in da knees
oughta get pimp smacked like Bumble Bee's

More than meets the eye
cuz inside theres some guy
"Optimus this situation is really ominous!"
so another fight another battle
and only two are left to rattle....


Pretty wack I guess
I really like transformers tho :P  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 17, 2004, 10:50:31 AM
I had forgotten this little thing...

What I See

I stare into the reflecting glass
Still looking for hope, but alas
All that I can see is rage
Myself- in my book He's another page

In me He wishes the pain to grow
Through me the anguish will always flow
Subconscious thoughts may do harm
My thoughts affected by His dark charm

I will break Him
I will feign Him
I will erase Him
I will drain Him

That pain, it grows still benign
Under no conditions will it flee
On the outside I still seem fine
But you don't understand what I see

Evict Him from my mind I must
Noone will He ever let me trust
He thinks He's to be appreciated
He doesn't see that I'm frustrated

Overprotective little child
My thoughts he lets roam wild
Endless anger dances upon my heart
From me I soon must have him part

I will break Him
I will feign Him
I will erase Him
I will drain Him

That pain, it grows still benign
Under no conditions will it flee
On the outside I still seem fine
But you don't understand what I see

Inside me no shelter can I find
From His bounds I'll never be free
And still you think that I am fine
But you don't understand what I see

©2003-2004 BlasterDRP

Yeah, just a case of split personality and self-uncertainty. You want a good example, watch Army of Darkness for the mirror scene. ;o


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 17, 2004, 09:36:01 PM
You copyrighted it? :o  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 17, 2004, 10:37:30 PM
Wow that's awesome (y)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on April 18, 2004, 12:24:04 AM
Quote
You copyrighted it? :o
What, got any problems with that? :P

Yeah its really impressive (y)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 18, 2004, 01:20:27 AM
No thats just not ehhh normal i guess you could say


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on April 18, 2004, 04:59:13 AM
Danke sehr. :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on April 18, 2004, 05:09:15 AM
I think Blitz's lyric is the bestest of them all.

-Rusty Nails


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 18, 2004, 07:55:54 AM
OH ROFL!

Thank you Rusty!! :D

*Ego Alert* :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Moloch on April 18, 2004, 05:26:07 PM
Quote
I think Blitz's lyric is the bestest of them all.

-Rusty Nails
I second that. His song is different and original. (almost) Everything else in here is the always popular anti-social, dark, gothy teen depressive phase. Not saying that this tone can't be a good thing though... try sopor aeternus for size...

Good one, blitz.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on April 18, 2004, 07:01:29 PM
Lol dunno wether you like this one then Moloch. Anyway it's depressive only becouse it fitted the music not becouse I'm depressive himself (of course I was like everyone else somewhere in my life, so I know what it feels like don't worry :D)
I'll record it once so you'll hear why. The melody is kinda sad (I had this melody in my head for ages but no lyrics lol)
Lyrics are about paranoia and depression:

Taken Away

If death is all I ever need,
to escape this reality
I'm sorry but I'll have to stay
No death won't take that pain away

Chorus:
And I don't want you to say that it's allright
it only feelds my insecurity
No I don't want to fall asleep this night
only to wake up and see
that they've taken everything away

the darkness gets broken by some light (but)
Is it real? Isn't it too bright?
I'm just too tired let me rest
in this endless circle of loneliness

*Chorus*

If you think that death is better you are wrong

Reaching out again, again and again
If hope is all we need, explain me when
the light, it comes too close, burning me alive
and somewhere deep inside, I feel the hell arrive   NO!

*Chorus*

Taken everything away


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on April 18, 2004, 07:29:27 PM
Heh, Sounds like some Linkin Park song (Pushing me away for example) nice one (y)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on April 19, 2004, 06:14:29 PM
enimies?
enimies?
enimies?
NO!
Brothers and Sisters n creation!
Pic up the peaces and make a Nation!
 


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 19, 2004, 09:14:48 PM
Quote
Transformers
Lol could someone translate it to English? :P
Anyway, I like those lyrics guys, and Steph, I think you've really got a talent, you should become a professionalist! :biggrin:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Revenant on April 19, 2004, 10:18:09 PM
OMGOMGOMG!!! Stephano, do you want to write lyrics for my band? We will credit you for it of course and if we ever release something, your name will be in the booklet + you get a free copy :biggrin:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 20, 2004, 03:55:30 AM
Dude Transformers is english

search for it ROFL!!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 04:40:38 AM
lol do you really wanna have a look to some of the lyrics I wrote for my band months ago when we were still writing songs in English ?...  :lol: They really suck but here are the best (does it mean worst ?) ones  :P :

SKATE, GIRLS AND ROCKíNíROLL (this one is short but I like the lyrics)

Skate girls and rockíníroll the three main things in my life
Instead of going to school go ride your board outside
Ignore all the shit around you enjoy your ride youíre alive
Enjoy what youíve been given cause you only live once

Skate girls and rockíníroll

Look at all the hot chicks when you ride down the street
Let your thoughts out man and fuck any censorship
And when you come back home tired of your skate session
Just grab your guitar and write another punk rock song

Skate girls and rockíníroll

WE AINíT ANOTHER FU*KIN POP-PUNK BAND (a song for credibility  :lol: )

Oh everybody seems to wanna follow the trend
But you know we ainít another pop-punk band
We tried to write a pop song it came out rather lame
See how through this one no message is spread

(this song is very short but we wanted it to be a five-minute song you know like the ones those crappy commercial pop-punk bands dare to release. No comment)

Wait I've got some more, I just hope this won't be considered as spam because I really don't want it to - it just makes me happy to share my old songs with people from the community  :P  so they could tease me for years after that


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 04:50:10 AM
Okay here are a few more songs by me...  :oops: Please don't judge me too hard, remember I'm french and it's not that easy to write songs in English (I guess that's why I stopped  :-? )

WORTH ME (short and very fast one - I like it)

Youíre riding your high horse
Telling me to fuck off
You feel so superior
Thatís your biggest error
You donít know what Iím all about
But you seem to be so proud
You scorn me you try to teach me
Things about morality
Youíd better save your breath
Youíll never be worth me

THE IRONY OF CHAMPOMY (this one is funny I think... Just so you know, Champomy is a very popular non-alcoholized drink for children)

My one-night girlfriend has just left me
Iíve been laughed at by everybody
The party sucks the music stinks
And Iíve nothing but non-alcoholized drinks !

The irony of Champomy

Without alcohol, partyís crazier
Without alcohol, my painís harder
Iím going through something that really sucks
And I canít even get drunk
Iím looking for something funny
But all I can see is... Champomy

The irony of Champomy

MICAELA (oh man this one is good I think... It's about my ex-girlfriend from Finland - well you don't care, here are the lyrics  :D )

Iíve tried to forget you Iíve tried to get you outta my head
Iíve told myself a million times That I wonít see you again
I thought you were gone forever Now youíre back in my brain
Why canít I stop thinking of you Fuck I donít understand
Looks like I let my feelings Go way outta hand
Now I sit back and wonder When all this is gonna end

I remember the times we had and I piss off my friends
Iím always telling them about you And they donít give a damn
I know that in our story Iím the one to blame
But why the fuck did you act like You were playing the game
In my situation I Shouldnít even complain
I lived my best times with you I wonít even dare to forgetíem

Now Iím still waiting for My love to wash away
You canít imagine how hard it is To wake up everyday
To stare at this picture Of her on my wall
To feel your heart bounding Knowing that youíre all alone
I feel like Iíve lost the only Thing Iíve ever owned
Now gotta try to forget you Micaela from Finland

FORBIDDEN DREAMS (OK this is the last one... Enjoy the lyrics)

Gotta tell ya last night
I had a fuckin dream
About a place where everything was right
And most of all where all the laws seemed
To be applicable to everyone
No rich to use their money as a beam
No racism segregation or abuse
No torture no crimes and no corrupted judges
And you know I was so happy I had tears in my eyes
I thought my wishes were at last realized
Then my father woke me up
Cause I had to go to school
Falling straight from my Heaven
Back into this world of fools
Tell me if we dream of a better world
Like prisoners dream of freedom
Would you gainsay if you were told
That in this world somethingís wrong
I hope for you that you wonít

OK I must apologize for those two way too long posts  :lol:  And I must also apologize because those lyrics totally suck. Any comments ?  :-?  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 20, 2004, 05:11:46 AM
aight I guess but where is the rhyme? :(  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 05:19:46 AM
I told you those songs were crappy... Actually there are attempts to rhymes on most of the songs - well f**k that ! I just feel too much ashamed  :oops:  The songs I wrote in French are better (well I hope)... Could you please forget that you read that stuff, thank you  ;-|  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 20, 2004, 05:51:36 AM
Write it in spanish and it all rhymes

(no offense to spanish speaking people)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 06:03:05 AM
I don't speak Spanish  >:-(  What about translating them in Japanese ?  :-?

(no offense to Japanese spaking people)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 20, 2004, 06:07:04 AM
lol
did you read mine? ;) its cool
its like a page back


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 06:36:24 AM
Yep your song is good  ! :P  As for me I've wrote WAY more songs in English but I won't even dare to post them here. Well, maybe, if enough people ask me...  :huh: Not a chance


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 20, 2004, 06:38:07 AM
I know :D  ;)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 20, 2004, 08:03:18 AM
> Alex

Yeah maybe....... my full list has 32 now but who's gonna read those sick things :(

> Amund

Dunno what kind of lyric you like so ? ;)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 20, 2004, 05:40:00 PM
Hey BlitZ I just wrote a very short song about my other songs :

They suck they suck they suck
But I don't give a f*ck

You should like it, it all rhymes  :P  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 21, 2004, 03:50:12 AM
lol
You got MSN/AIM/Yahoo! ?I could help you write some songs :cool:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 21, 2004, 03:56:35 AM
Yeah I've got MSN but I don't write songs in English anymore (it's not hard to guess why  ;) )


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 21, 2004, 05:40:51 AM
Translation lol....


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 21, 2004, 05:44:28 AM
^ lol sorry my English sucks huh ?
Quote
You got MSN/AIM/Yahoo! ?I could help you write some songs
=> I don't write songs in the English anymore

Was it so hard to understand ? !!!  :-?  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 21, 2004, 05:46:18 AM
^ in the English LANGUAGE duh
Sorry for that  :spam:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 22, 2004, 06:02:17 AM
Eh I know what you said ever heard of a translation site....ROFL :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on April 22, 2004, 10:35:03 PM
^
Your english isn't really that great also but ok :P  (like me lol)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on April 22, 2004, 11:30:42 PM
Quote
BlitZ Posted on Apr 21 2004, 12:40 AM
† Translation lol....†

I thought that you didn't understand what I said and that you asked for a translation - if you want to be understood => write sentences  :D  (Sorry BlitZ  :lol: )

 :offtopic:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 24, 2004, 07:21:56 PM
I was getting really sick writing those things so I wrote a new song. It doesn't have lots of rimes since its a fast song and it has a different tune.........comments are welcome and song's name is : Daily Chaos

People are screaming
the guns are shouting
and the chaos in taking place
in the streets of our homeland

Gang battles
Car fights
Everyday is a battle to survive
there's no more sense around here

The future is dark
and nobody gives a damn
that our land is falling apart
due to this violence and incompetence crack

Chorus(x2)
I am tired of living here
everyday is a daily fear
All I have is my gun and my V8
I am getting sick of this wait
We are isolated from any kind of support
Living here is a damned task
and nobody asks when this hell will end

I step in my car and drive with night
rainning is falling again
I wanna know if this will ever come to an end
This is how I live
and this is the way I am
shooting and racing daily to survive

Suddenly a shout
and then a blow up
I look to my left and get scared :
3 deads and a wrecked car
My poor mind is full of scars
and I am afraid they will never heal

Violence and Chaos runs together
scaring my days out
Leaving is all I keep thinking about

Chorus (x2)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on April 24, 2004, 10:10:39 PM
nICE I liked it


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on April 25, 2004, 09:00:08 PM
Great lyric man (try to write something in Polish lol :D ) your style really rules!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on April 25, 2004, 09:04:30 PM
Quote
Great lyric man

Dzieki  :D

Quote
(try to write something in Polish lol icon_cheesygrin.gif )

One day I will but it's too much complicated stuff so it takes time to learn  :P.Thanks for posting Alex (y)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on May 01, 2004, 12:04:22 AM
Quote
The weakness
Does it make you afraid?
And do you prefer being accepted?
Your weakness
Just jump when asked to do
And dominate the outsiders

I really liked this part (y)

Quote
After reading this thread, it is quite obvious that we should call Stephano the genius in here.

I only like to write  but thanks (y)

I wrote this poem here and it's kinda stupid but okay.


Street Fun

Finally the night came
so we just go out
making our tires scream aloud
The grid is ready
8 damn fast cars in line
7 will loose and 1 will get fine
The light is red
fun is about to start
Lights go yellow
It's about to begin
Lights go green
Smoke goes up
and the crowd goes mad
thinking of the fun they will have
even if it's illegal and in the middle of the street
Don't drivers get scared ?
They don't think on that
They only have eyes to the road
My ride goes fine
but there's a mad Accura by my side
It keeps going from left to right
bothering me with its blue headlight
I speed up more
and the guy horns in my back
Finally a hard turn
Both cars get together and tires are about to burn
I keep pushing since I don't give a damn
Now the Accura guy understands
he can't deal with me so he slows down
and my Neon screams even loud
When my tires were just warming
I hear that damn warning
Cops are coming to take us under arrest
They won't catch me up since my baby is the best
I take my ride to a dark street and the cops have fun
while the crowd tries to run
Half an hour later silence is up once again
I turn on my green lights saying to my ride :
"We made it again my pride"
I head to a local bar
park my car and look at the stars
asking myself when the next race will start !


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on May 01, 2004, 01:09:22 AM
^ Lol, it should be used in GTA Vice City :P Really nice. You're good at it pal ;)
And Rob I also really like your lyric, very meaningful and oh-so-true ;) It seems to describe some guys from my school :-?


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on May 02, 2004, 08:53:20 AM
I was quite pissed of when I wrote this one. I made half when I woke up and the other half inside the car going to my university ;)

A long time ago I lost my will to fight
A long time ago  my life stopped being bright
I look at myself in the mirror
Am I really that thing ?
with that horrible look ?
My eyes already say everything
All I wanted was to be normal
but perhaps I can't anymore
fucking depressed and fucking bored
Life is just a big whore
My family says I am getting isolated
My friends already say I can't be tolerated
So why in hell am I still here ?
Suddenly appears a lonely tear
which expresses all my fears
I am afraid of the world
I am afraid of myself
because I just don't know
when and how this will end
It can be soon or later
It can be nice or bad
This waiting makes me mad
I should seek help
but everything is far and dark
in my doomed highway
while nothing good or bad happens
I just pray to be strong
asking to be fine the next day
even if this never happens
I still pray at night
asking to be better
to recover my will to fight
to find the light of life
which will make me fine
and to forget that damn scary knife
Maybe it's too much to ask
Maybe I won't achieve that
and I will have to live
with this damned task
I really didn't ask for this
but it just came to me
soon I'll go to school
so I try to get cool
say "goodbye" to mom and dad
too bad they don't know I wanna be dead
that I live scared and can't support that
it's not their fault...it's just me
since I won't dare to tell them that
so I get into the car and pray
to be alive in the next stupid day


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 02, 2004, 08:55:30 AM
Deep man Deep....


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 02, 2004, 09:11:10 AM
BITCH!
You wanna mess wit' me?
Boy all my weapons is deadly!
Golf Clubs, Bats, Guns and stuff.
I made gangstas say dats enough
say boy you wanna play, I play rough
Pwn!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on May 02, 2004, 09:22:22 AM
^
LOL ! 10 AMens for this one ;)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 02, 2004, 09:26:07 AM
Sweet!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on May 02, 2004, 03:06:13 PM
Quote
Why I divide (Wijkstra)


I divide myself from the others
I will not follow the rest of the crowd
You all are a bunch of paranoids
With your faces aimed at the south
Don't expect me to come any closer
Because I know I have to stay away
One day you'll be out of this system
But you won't listen - to what I say

The weakness
Does it make you afraid?
And do you prefer being accepted?
Your weakness
Just jump when asked to do
And dominate the outsiders

Iīm not one of yours
And I will never be
Iīll follow my own course
Because my life is about me
You're just a braindead worker
Your leader doesn't really care
One day you will be kicked out
And finally notice - that this isn't fair

The weakness
Does it make you afraid?
And do you prefer being accepted?
Your weakness
Just jump when asked to do
And dominate the outsiders

Stay with the pack
And don't speak when spoken to
No room for your opinion
But safety in numbers of fools
Aside all your so-called friends
You could make it to the end
And stay alive instead of dying
But you remain a publicity whore - For rent
 
I really like this one (y)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on May 03, 2004, 03:55:08 AM
Thanks :)  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 04, 2004, 05:58:28 AM
The Secrets No One Knows

Someone I know has a secret he cant tell
He feels like he wants to yell
Family doesnt know nor care
yet when they leave and it gets dark quite and lonely
he is there, knife in hand
Thinking about his life and how it should end
If it could, something lingers, he has to stay
Instead he just aims at the arm and slashes away
At night he thinks of sick thoughts
and the fight he thinks cant be fought
He prays, to live another day and just for this mess to go away,
Just to have a good time like the yesterday

YES I WROTE THAT BITCH! :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on May 04, 2004, 11:34:09 PM
Tribute to Ash (Evil Dead)
Deep in the woods
All in a house
Their fate is sealed
They have their doubts
One finds the tape
Then it is played
It revives the curse
To raise the dead

Here it comes
It smashes through walls
When it takes your friend
It wants to swallow your soul

Take the sheet from over your head
Be quick to jump out of your bed
These demon souls wish to be fed
Coming quickly is the Evil Dead

He killed all his friends
He now sits alone
Until some new people
Arrive there from home
They hear of the story
When his grasp was damned
Then he stabbed it down
And he lobbed off his hand

And so he says
Some monster awake
Comes for all our souls
Letís pray for our sake

Ash, get your chainsaw revved
Have the book, it must be read
These demon souls wish to be fed
Coming quickly is the Evil Dead

Through the portal
From out of the sky
He starts to hear
Medieval menís cry
They seek the help
Of a noble man
Strong warrior
To save their land

They captured him
Made him their slave
They didnít know he did
Know to be brave

Pushed into the pit
A destined dead man
Rose from the pit
Their chosen strong man
He led their forces
On their fight for life
Won against the strength
Of the dead manís strife

Hesitant to return him
The medieval men
Granted his only wish
And he left then

Klaatu verata nikto!

Hears evil from anotherís head
Hears the cry of wishing to be fed
Another one to suck down his lead
He halts return of the Evil Dead

© 2004 Blaster


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: ShrinkDuke on May 05, 2004, 12:43:43 AM
Heh your lyric is really good BlitZ, did you made that by yourself? And BTW, no wonder who's that about :(


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 05, 2004, 03:56:39 AM
Yes I wrote it late at night, and yes we all know who its about, unfortanately :(

Heh cool Lyric Blaster it rocked!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Revenant on May 05, 2004, 02:08:07 PM
writing lyrics about others is offending to the subject person!
I liked your lyric Blaster! sounds familiar hehehe


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on May 06, 2004, 03:31:33 AM
Hey Blaster, Nice One man (y).


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on May 06, 2004, 03:59:05 AM
Evil Dead owns you bitches. :D :lol:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: deathwhore on May 06, 2004, 04:05:42 AM
I feel a sudden urge to watch AoD  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: BlitZ on May 06, 2004, 06:45:15 AM
EHm Mr Amund, Stephano liked it so STFU!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on June 14, 2004, 01:21:22 AM

This Depression is so scaring and deep
that my soul here begs for the final sleep
Its unworthy to live
when everything around is only fog and pain
Daily in an endless rain
Of Sadness and Dispair
This is not Fair, This is not fair
Why it chose me ? Why I am still here ?
Fears in my mind and Tears in my eyes
Someone help me to find Light
Someone help me to feel fine
I am lost in this bloody jungle
Tired of listening to this rumble
I will go ahead with my sacrifice
it will be better for the world and myself
I will suicide and finally will rest
I have failed to complete life's task
The grave yard awaits me
Death is moaning for me
Goobye miserable world
Welcome my soul to Peace!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on June 21, 2004, 02:17:27 AM
I just wrote a good one again :) It's about digital communication and the consequences you can get from it. It must have something to do with people in my neighborhood who never leave the house anymore, and are stuck on msn or chatboxes like crazy. ;)

Work of Net (Wijkstra)


We are attached to a system
That makes you blind
We are attached to a system
Which disables feelings

Transfer messages
Spread out mistakes
Recieve complaints
Fight whatever it takes
Talk to someone
You think you know
Addictive communication
Which won't come and go

We are attached to a system
Which transfers love
We are attached to a system
Which plants hate

Comfortably I
Sit back and watch
Eating it our
Life away
Remain stuck behind
The little screen
And tire your
Eyes there everyday

We are attached to a system
Keeps me in obscurity
We are attached to a system
With no security[/i]


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on June 25, 2004, 03:25:12 AM
We are working pretty fast in that band I am playing in. We are writing our own shit now and... well... I write lyrics like crazy. :lol:

Maybe someone in here may recognise himself in this one. If he does, accept it as a tribute, not inspiration. I wrote this one kinda about you Steph, my friend. (y)

The Final Window (Wijkstra)


I am standing in front of the window
Facing the dilemma of my fate
Should I jump or should I just stay here
Burning myself in anger and hate

The way you poured your pain all over me
Is enough to make myself clear
That life isnīt that good as they say it is
And thatīs why I donīt stay here

Ending my life may not be the answer
But holding on here isnīt it too
And since nobody cares for me
I guess itīs the best to do

The loss of my so called life
Is just a drip in the sea
After the funeral on a sunny may day
Nobody will ever remember me

I cut myself one more time
To make sure I am still alive
Because then I will stand up
And walk to the window for my final dive[/i]


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on June 25, 2004, 03:51:38 AM
^Really nice (y) Change it a bit here and there and it might just be a good one to use for a funeral


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on June 25, 2004, 04:56:33 AM
So fucking deep and so fucking true that I don't have any fucking word to say :cry:  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on June 25, 2004, 07:33:29 AM
I wrote this one thinking on gothic metal


>> Relief <<

You all blame me
You all scary me
and tell me to have hope

Hope?Hope?What the f*ck is Hope?
I don't know what it is
but I know how to achieve
cutting deep and daily
ruining my skin

It's so sweet to see the red tears to drop
It's my personal relief to the pain you brought
Blood flows from my thigh
Physically wounded and Dead inside
and only Lord knows how I hate my life

My soul yells for help
Inside this prison trying to leave this hell
I need to brake this chain
I need to remove this bars
but I keep failing and falling
and the only thing left for me
are these doomed and deep scars

How far will I go?
I would like to know
How far will I go ?
If you knnow,please let me know


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on July 09, 2004, 04:57:26 PM
Only Ducthies will understand, but I will post the next song which  mrline and I made up :D  And its soooo funny!
We allready made the song also lol :D

Hou je bek - ganstar rap

Chorus:
(mrline: )Hou je bek, (Maartn: ) ik schiet je lek,
(mrline: ) ik breek je nek, (Maartn: ) ik smeer je in met veren en pek

Rap1 (mrline) 1 2 3 4
Godverdomme vuile hufter, waneer ik jouw rotkop zie
Weet je dan ni, dat ik je ga slachten als een cavi
ja ik weet dat je denkt dat je wel veilig bent
maar dan moet ik toch echt zeggen dat je me dan niet echt goed kent
want ik haat jouw geblaat ik wil spugen in je gelaat
en als je denkt dat je kan vluchten, ha nu is het al te laat
Het wordt rood voor mijn ogen als jij je BEK open doet
Nu ben je de lul, ja NU PROEF IK BLOED!!!

Chorus

Rap 2 (Maartn) yo yo yo
Heb je dan nog steeds ni door, dat je mijn grooste vijand bent,
Ik haat je zoveel, dat ik je dood heb uitgepland
Dus vuile klootzak, hou op met je eruit te praten
Ik schiet je lek, zodat je vol zit met met fucking gaten
De wereld was al pijn genoege, zonder jouw fucking kop
Blijf maar beter uit mijn buurt, want ik maak je af, fliker op!
Hou je maatjes die je ni hebt, er nou maar buiten
Het is aleen tussen jouw en mij, stomme rotkop snuiter!!!!!!!

Chorus
Bridge

Chorus + rap1 (op het zelfde moment)

END :P


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on July 09, 2004, 06:15:11 PM
Oh boy...;o


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: HighWire on July 27, 2004, 12:16:35 AM
Quote
Heb je dan nog steeds ni door, dat je mijn grooste vijand bent,
Ik haat je zoveel, dat ik je dood heb uitgepland

lol :D

This is awesome! :D  


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on July 31, 2004, 02:52:31 AM
I wrote this for my gilrfriend :


My Dark Angel

Forgotten by the world I lost my soul
Empty inside I had only death in my mind
My reality was blinded by darkness and tears
While I was fighting with myself to leave my world of fears
Cutting my skin to survive
Warm Tears flowing away with my Life
Torment and Despair clouding my days
Depression and Loneliness fogging my nights
My tiny ice of life was breaking apart
And the cold waters of guiltiness ready to involve my heart
When I was about to sink
A shinning rope made me blink
A rope of love, a rope of hope
I couldnít believe it was true
I was already used to feel depressed and blue
Even though I grabbed it
And I was pulled back to the snow
In the middle of that white hell she was there
A Dark Angel filled with torment and despair
But She was strong with love and understanding inside her sad eyes
I feel fucking fine to know she is by my side
Her wings are my ride to happiness and life
She owns my soul and her love warms me in the snow
It bugs me to know I am not there with her in her lair
Dark and Tormented but I would feel safe in there
People can call me sick and mad
But know this: I donít give a fuck to that
Her and me can feel grim
But the love for each other we have
Makes us happy, makes us strong
To face life and support everything
These lines are for you hon
Always by my side
Doesnít matter what the fuck goes on
With you I am safe and fine


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on July 31, 2004, 06:10:37 AM
Quote
Only Ducthies will understand, but I will post the next song which  mrline and I made up :D  And its soooo funny!
We allready made the song also lol :D

Hou je bek - ganstar rap

Chorus:
(mrline: )Hou je bek, (Maartn: ) ik schiet je lek,
(mrline: ) ik breek je nek, (Maartn: ) ik smeer je in met veren en pek

Rap1 (mrline) 1 2 3 4
Godverdomme vuile hufter, waneer ik jouw rotkop zie
Weet je dan ni, dat ik je ga slachten als een cavi
ja ik weet dat je denkt dat je wel veilig bent
maar dan moet ik toch echt zeggen dat je me dan niet echt goed kent
want ik haat jouw geblaat ik wil spugen in je gelaat
en als je denkt dat je kan vluchten, ha nu is het al te laat
Het wordt rood voor mijn ogen als jij je BEK open doet
Nu ben je de lul, ja NU PROEF IK BLOED!!!

Chorus

Rap 2 (Maartn) yo yo yo
Heb je dan nog steeds ni door, dat je mijn grooste vijand bent,
Ik haat je zoveel, dat ik je dood heb uitgepland
Dus vuile klootzak, hou op met je eruit te praten
Ik schiet je lek, zodat je vol zit met met fucking gaten
De wereld was al pijn genoege, zonder jouw fucking kop
Blijf maar beter uit mijn buurt, want ik maak je af, fliker op!
Hou je maatjes die je ni hebt, er nou maar buiten
Het is aleen tussen jouw en mij, stomme rotkop snuiter!!!!!!!

Chorus
Bridge

Chorus + rap1 (op het zelfde moment)

END :P
Translated it all for you :P using WordLingo or WorldLingo or something, who cares anyway. The translation sucks ass but well, it's still understandable (did I spell it right ?). Oh yeah I had to edit the text a bit or the translator wouldn't work, I don't know why but it wouldn't.

Quote
Hou your mouth, I shoot you leak, I break you ring, I rub you with feathers and pitch 1.2.3.4 god-far-stupid ones dirty
hufter, waneer I your rotkop see Weet you then ni, that I you will slaughter that as cavi yes I weet you think that you
are, however, safe but then I must say nevertheless really that you do
not know me then real well because I hate your bleated I want spit in
your gelaat and if you think that you can escape, ha now is it already too late it becomes red for my eyes if you do
your MOUTH open now are you the lul, YES NOW TEST I BLEED!!!
Have you then still ni, that you my grooste enemy are, I hate you so much, that I have you dead uitgepland therefore dirty klootzak, hou with you to talk I shoot you leak, so that your full sits with with fucking breaches the world was
already pain genoege, without your fucking head remain but improve from my buurt, because I finish you, fliker on!
Hou your maatjes which your ni have, there nou but outside it is aleen between your and me, stomme rotkop snuiter!!!!!!!
(at same the moment)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: kinslayermds on July 31, 2004, 11:10:23 AM
why can't I die
its not your time
I can hear it
I try all the time
its not your time
I can hear it
why can't I die
but the thought
why can't I die
blinds my eyes
why did you do it
you'll never see me cry
why did you do it
for the anger bides its time
why did you do it
the rage builds inside like the demon I'd tried to hide
so I stopped
I gatherd my breath
its not your time
I collected my thoughts
its not your time
I couldn't do it
I'm to scared
I can't endure it yet
its not your time
for pain is the reason why....
grabbed my keys got into the car
I can hear it
everythings fine just pull into the street
I can hear it
damn I'm hungry I'll go get something to eat
but nothing responds
I guess I was early
---------------------
I don't really own a car :D
please note that humor is my release so something has to be funny at least to me


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on August 01, 2004, 12:24:49 AM
I liked man (y).......do you have more stuff ? :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: kinslayermds on August 01, 2004, 12:58:14 AM
not really all my earlier stuff is on the back of school papers that I've since thrown away.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on August 17, 2004, 12:01:30 AM
Quote
Translated it all for you :P using WordLingo or WorldLingo or something, who cares anyway. The translation sucks ass but well, it's still understandable (did I spell it right ?). Oh yeah I had to edit the text a bit or the translator wouldn't work, I don't know why but it wouldn't.
[snapback]87275[/snapback]

Hou your maatjes which your ni have, there nou but outside it is aleen between your and me, stomme rotkop snuiter!!!!!!!
(at same the moment)


HAHAHAHA now thats what I call funny translation :'D



Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on August 17, 2004, 12:14:49 AM
Quote
Only Ducthies will understand, but I will post the next song which  mrline and I made up :D  And its soooo funny!
We allready made the song also lol :D

Hou je bek - ganstar rap

Chorus:
(mrline: )Hou je bek, (Maartn: ) ik schiet je lek,
(mrline: ) ik breek je nek, (Maartn: ) ik smeer je in met veren en pek

Rap1 (mrline) 1 2 3 4
Godverdomme vuile hufter, waneer ik jouw rotkop zie
Weet je dan ni, dat ik je ga slachten als een cavi
ja ik weet dat je denkt dat je wel veilig bent
maar dan moet ik toch echt zeggen dat je me dan niet echt goed kent
want ik haat jouw geblaat ik wil spugen in je gelaat
en als je denkt dat je kan vluchten, ha nu is het al te laat
Het wordt rood voor mijn ogen als jij je BEK open doet
Nu ben je de lul, ja NU PROEF IK BLOED!!!

Chorus

Rap 2 (Maartn) yo yo yo
Heb je dan nog steeds ni door, dat je mijn grooste vijand bent,
Ik haat je zoveel, dat ik je dood heb uitgepland
Dus vuile klootzak, hou op met je eruit te praten
Ik schiet je lek, zodat je vol zit met met fucking gaten
De wereld was al pijn genoege, zonder jouw fucking kop
Blijf maar beter uit mijn buurt, want ik maak je af, fliker op!
Hou je maatjes die je ni hebt, er nou maar buiten
Het is aleen tussen jouw en mij, stomme rotkop snuiter!!!!!!!

Chorus
Bridge

Chorus + rap1 (op het zelfde moment)

END :P
[snapback]84178[/snapback]

LOL the ultimate gangstah rap! :D
Well MRCK lemme give you the real translation (prepare to Laugh your ass off)
Totally fucks up the rhyming and rythm but ah well

CHORUS:

Shut your mouth, I'll shoot you down,
I'll break your neck,
I'll rub you in with feathers and ehmm pitch? (not sure lol)

Rap1:
God damned you dirty bastard when I see your fucking face,
\don't you know, I want to slaughter you like a guinea pig
Yes I know you might think, that you are safe
but I have to inform you that in that case you don't know me very well
I hate your blabbering, I want to spit in your face
If you think you escape me, ha! you're allready too late
It becomes red before my eyes when you open your MOUTH
Yeah now you're fucking screwed, no I taste BLOOD!!!!

*chorus*

Rap2:
You still don't know that you're my biggest enemy?
I hate you so much, I've planned out your death
So dirty bastard, don't try to talk yourself out of it
I will shoot you, yes I will shoot you full of fucking bulletholes :D
The world allready was bad enough without your fucking face,
You better stay away from me cuz I'll slaughter you, fuck of!!!
Leave those friends you don't have out of it
Cuz its only between you and me you stupid fuckface asshole !!! (hahaha)

CHORUS

CHORUS and first rap at the same time

END


Dont worry our next song will be a little more... serious :D


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on September 19, 2004, 09:27:36 PM
Yo guys, no Lyrics for songs anymore? :sad:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Geoffrey on September 19, 2004, 09:40:42 PM
Those of you that played my speedtrax map pack will recognise this song

The magic key :excl:



Missing you, missing you
Missing you, magic crew

( Listen up)

This sudden end to my days
Makes me wish I'd changed my ways
Spent more time with the posse
One-t, nine-t, bull-t, me
From up here, life seems so small
what's the
meaning of it all?
Miss the way it used to be
One-t, nine-t, bull-t, me

Where in the world could I be?
Homies looking so cool, cool, I'm cool-t!
Tuxedos made of snow
Is there something I should know?
Mom and Pop and little bro
Dead and gone so long ago
Could this be paradise at last?
The first test I've ever passed

Chorus:
Music's the odyssey
It's here for you, for me
Just listen and find the magic key (listen up)


Music's the odyssey (yeah)
It's here for you, for me (Magic key)
Just listen like your life be free


Blissful days, what you gonna do?
Still I miss my old t-crew
Can't afterlive without'em
I just wish they only knew!
May they have lived without a home
But my homies love me kept me warm
Taught me to forget 'bout the game
Money, hatred, hunger, pain

This sudden end to my days
Makes me wish I'd changed my ways
Spent more time with the posse
One-t, Nine-t, Bull-t, me
From up here, life seems so small
what's the meaning of it all?
Miss the way it used to be
One-t, Nine-t, Bull-t, me

Chorus:
Music's the odyssey( yeah)
It's here for you, for me
Just listen and find the magic key (yours truly)/(listen up)

Music's the odyssey( yeah)
It's here for you, for me (magic key)
Just listen like your life be free


Missing you, missing you
Missing you, magic crew

The game of life is over (over)
Wish I'd stopped to smell the clover (clover)
Sing it'till your face turns blue
Bull-t, Nine-t, one-t, crew
Spent more time giving out the products
And less time clickin' off pops
Sing it' till your face turns blue
Bull-t, nine-t, cool-t, too

Had a meeting with my maker
The superhuman baker
He popped me in the oven
And set the dial to lovin'
Now I watch over my boys
Help'em keep on making noise
Never pictured me with wings
Guess I've heard of stranger things

Chorus:
Music's the odyssey (aha)/(yeah)
It's here for you, for me (yeah,yeah)
Just listen and find the magic key

Music's the odyssey (aha, aha)
It's here for you, for me ( yeah, yeah)
Just listen like your life be free


Missing you, missing you
Missing you, magic crew


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MSandt on September 19, 2004, 09:54:34 PM
"It'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob from your mom"

Blink 182: Blowjob


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on September 19, 2004, 09:58:15 PM
But that one isn't made by yourself right?  :huh: :smile:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on September 23, 2004, 08:59:32 PM
Quote
"It'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob, it'd be nice - to have a blowjob from your mom"

Blink 182: Blowjob
[snapback]93426[/snapback]

Pure poetry  :cool2:


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: kinslayermds on September 24, 2004, 03:55:22 AM
close the barricade on the door it leave to dust boild it calls to me at times but I justignore it's wail maybe all is well for me but all pause to break open the shift in my motiontry tobe clear while I try to near die to need the lonlyness I find cry if it help but it breaks away from me messengers escape to lie some I found it in all my pain underline with help I face it all the same redone anew it subtracts its fear lonlieness cracks and mutes me all the same disjointed thoughts harken to the past as sad feverently they fall to speak to its do it feels like night is comeing and all is getting dark I strained to hear a strange murmer as the breeze seemed to stop the world slow down and the needles began to start weakly I gaze as my friends the rock is trying to cry
at time I try to die
at times I want to cry
But I'm happy all the time
writing on the wall awakens the past
My armor is rusting away
So I'll end it all today
I will sleep forever and never feel anything
I will meet my maker and we'll be safer this way
I will sleep forever and be happy to free
confined by the abstract and to begin to rise
and without warning and some how without shock I find myself wakeing up
----------
I always have trouble end ing these things... that was supposed to  be part clever part ironic oh well I just whipped this one up and for some reson I can't write happy stuff or refer to myself as Hime we them or it for very long


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Moloch on September 24, 2004, 04:19:33 AM
http://208.28.114.21:8080/poetry/VotingServlet (http://208.28.114.21:8080/poetry/VotingServlet)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: William Gee on September 24, 2004, 05:49:45 PM
We Are Monkeys
Travis

People think they're funny when they haven't the wit
Others think they're gorgeous but inside they feel shit
Many think they're brainy but they haven't a clue
And I think I'm clever cos I'm singing this to you

We are wrong, we are wrong
We are all so, so wrong
We are monkeys
We are false, we run true
We should be in the zoo with our uncles
And if you don't believe
Go and climb up a tree and you'll love it
You're a fool to believe anymore
So believe you're a monkey

All the clever monkeys telling us what to do
Telling us to stay in line and join the monkey queue
Thinking that they're special cos they went to private zoo
One day soon they're gonna end up in a monkey stew

They are wrong, they are wrong
They are all so, so wrong
They are monkeys
They are false, They run true
They should be in the zoo with their uncles
And if you don't believe
Go and climb up a tree and you'll love it
You're a fool to believe anymore
So believe you're a monkey


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on November 01, 2004, 05:35:14 AM
A parody on a Suicidal Tendencies song called 'Cyco' :P

-=-= ORIGINAL LYRICS =-=-

Quote
CYCO

Cyco cyco cyco cyco
Cyco cyco cyco cyco
Born cyco it's the way I was meant to be
Live cyco it's the only life for me

Burning burning burning burning
Burning burning burning burning
Burning up can't you see
But it's the only life for me

I'm burning up, the fire blazes inside
Out of control, so now you better hide
Run around the corner
But the corner never ends
You scream out, beg, shout
But the nightmare never ends
You turn around but you just see
What you saw before
Spin around, fall down
Now you see no more

Raging raging raging raging
Raging raging raging raging
Raging mad that may be
But it's the only life for me

I'm raging mad and soon you will know
I'm burning up from my head to toe

Cyco cyco cyco cyco
Cyco cyco cyco cyco
It's the only life I know
I was born to cyco

I'm cyco and my mind it starts to bend
Out of control, it seems to be the trend

Born to be cyco

-=-= MODIFIED LYRICS =-=-

TYPO

Typo typo typo typo
Typo typo typo typo
Make typos all day long on AMC
Make typos my keyboard is slippery

Typing typing typing typing
Typing typing typing typing
Typing wrong can't you see
In my posts on AMC

I'm trying to type fast, my fingers slip on it
Goddamn keyboard, makes my posts look like shit
I try to edit the post
But the damn page never loads
I scream out, beg, shout
But the nightmare never ends
You refresh the thing but you just see
What you saw before
Punch the damn screen
Now you see no more

Raging raging raging raging
Raging raging raging raging
Raging mad that may be
Because AMC's buggy

I'm raging mad and soon you will know
What my posts really mean, despite all the typos

Typo typo typo typo
Typo typo typo typo
It's the only life I know
I was born make typos

I made a typo and my mind it starts to bend
Cant edit the post, AMC is slow again

Born to make typos


:P


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on November 01, 2004, 08:01:09 AM
^
LOL :D Awesome :P and yeah so true :P


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on November 05, 2004, 02:11:01 AM
Nothing great. No, really. I haven't been able to come up with any stunning lyrical work. I don't think I ever really have, to be honest. Anyway, good luck understanding...

SHARING MY SKIN

I take a short glimpse in the mirror
I look just like my corrupted father
Lowering my face to rinse with water
Dry off my face? Why even bother?

I know that later on in the day
I'll be in my room, curled and sweating
The fan gently cools my small soaked body
Just feel like my mind is slowly dying

On the outside I'm just one man
On the inside there's mental mitosis
On the outside I'm coping well
On the inside I cannot bare this

The line that's drawn
It don't mean a thing
Still pushed aside
Sharing my skin

Each day I grow more tense and weary
Sweet alcohol just soothes my nerves
Draw a black mustache on the mirror
Kicking my senses to the curb

With dignity I lost my pride
Run away with tail tucked in legs
I already know that I am worthless
More than the man who only begs

On the outside I'm a happy man
On the inside there isn't just one
On the outside I laugh and kid
On the inside the damage is done

The line that's drawn
It don't mean a thing
Still pushed aside
Sharing my skin


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: kinslayermds on December 13, 2004, 10:59:48 AM
uh oh I jst found some of the old school papers with my "poems" on them I have one typed up ... typos and all, keep in this was for a grade.
I am a person
I am a bad sport
I am a noun
I am Original (just like everyone else)
I am blasphmiss
I am (too) lathargic
I am a boy
I am good at dark humor
I am misunderstood
... a music lover
a modest person
the best
your deity
fairly slow
very honest...if uour my friend of course.
good at t.f.c
a humioid
a mammal
not all there...wait what?
a good friend I think at least
currently useing
a movie fan
usaly overtak by spite when I hear something insanely stupid.
nuitral on most subjects
a bad speller, ^
a fairly fast reader
------------------------------------
no wonder I was a SPED. and what was with that "currently useing" thing I never did any drugs untill like last year. oh well.


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Quakis on January 30, 2005, 12:27:43 PM
=======
|                   *Bump*                    |
 =======

Remix of my song from page 1

Forget the fear of pain
but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger,
but let the temple bells ring.

Shine forth,
the charms of sacred birds.
Shine back,
the fields of enchanted herds.

The dreaded fear
So what's there to come
No place to run or hide
Shadows rise from instinct
Forfil my dreams!
Remember once, that i believe!!

Forget the temper of rising dead
but surpass the unique, striding wing
Forget the feeling of uprsing spread,
but let the golden, sun let you bring

Shine forth,
the charms of sacred birds.
Shine back,
the fields of enchanted herds.

The dreaded fear
So what's there to come
No place to run or hide
Shadows rise from instinct
Forfil my dreams!
Remember once, that i believe!!

Forget the fear of pain
but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger,
but let the temple bells ring.

Forget the fear of pain
but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger,
but let the temple bells ring.

Forget me altogether, let me die, to make sense in this world...


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Commander S. Wings on January 30, 2005, 12:38:32 PM
A shortie one that just poped up......

Lost over this cave yelling my silent scream
but I'm stuck here with my broken wings
while the icy wind blows
and freezes me
Only you to warm my soul
Only you to keep me here
You stopped my fears
and my river of tears
Over this endless night
there's still a dim light
which I'm following for you
as long as you howl
as long as I hear
we will keep together
over our arms forever


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on May 31, 2005, 03:16:42 PM
These are the lyrics of "Behind the sea" (song can be found in the musicians thread)

BEHIND THE SEA

I am calling your name as I watch to the sea
so full of memories
It seems I'm silent forever, some things can't be undone
some things are forever gone
Behind the horizon there's some place I can't see
somewhere behind the sea
It might be sending the waves that I'm seeing right here,
so vividly, so clear

the sun rises...

Chorus:
But the light is too bright, I just can't see
what is hidden behind this water, parting me
from the answers I never dared to seek
should I go look for them?
 This land of mystique behind the sea...

A lonely seebird is crying, is it in agony?
Like all living things a bird is never free
All toughts leave my head, all feelings leave my heart,
just sitting still, about to fall apart
The dark world around me it's beginning to fade,
to a much, much lighter shade
As dawn closes in I begin to rise up,
the horizon erupts.

the sun rises...

Chorus

*solo*

Chorus

I'm Sinking..
What is hidden behind the sea...


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Numan on May 31, 2005, 03:59:16 PM
^ Do we have an artist here or what? :)
Nice job MrLine!


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MRCK on June 02, 2005, 02:54:34 AM
Click there and scroll down.. (http://dynamic.gamespy.com/~amc/forums/index.php?showtopic=4859&st=15&#entry114645)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: mrline on June 05, 2005, 11:40:32 PM
Quote
Nice job MrLine!

Heh thnx :)

Here's the lyrics of "Reveal":


REVEAL

Sitting outside, only 5 of us
no one will move right now
It's already night, the cold chills our bones
but none will stand up
One of us just broke down and cried
carries too much weight this night
and then you collapse, no longer hide
the walls you built break down
couse

Sometimes we reveal ourselves

I'm torn by sorrow, torn by guilt
how could I know this night
would be this heavy, my eyes are filled
with tears, I cry
couse

Sometimes we reveal ourselves
our true self

The mask is trown off, here is the naked truth
no running away, no more light interludes
this is who we are, this is the final test
so much suffering to bear
now please rest...
couse

Sometimes we reveal ourselves


Check the musicians thread for the song itself :)


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Maartn on September 08, 2005, 04:14:41 PM
The lyrics from my new song "WAR!" (check "oostrum music corner" :P).

It's written by Mrline tho, not by me :)

--------------------------------

War!

WAR!

Fading away yes drifting away
The spilling of blood will colour this day
Screaming, shouting, and the chaos begins
When youíre this close to death you donít care who wins
You want no more hell, want to get out
Thousands die, they cry so loud
Youíre just one tiny person in a huge bloodbath
For war is known to destroy all in itís path

Chorus#1:

War is raging, say goodbye
Like all of us you will die  (you will die)
It doesnít matter why
Like all of us you will die  (you will DIE!)

All your memories, all those years
All those moments, all your tears
The goals you had, the things you begun
One gunshot, and theyíre all gone
Destroyed forever, like so many more
Youíre just another victim of war
Buildings explode, bombs fall down
A rain of grenades destroys another town

Chorus#1

Chorus#2:
Your life is slowly fading away
You see it all before your eyes
In this final hour you pray
But the air is filled with cries
Then you suddenly see light
The hell slowly drifts away
Now you know your body died
Like all of us this day

#Solo#

Chorus#1 + Chorus#2


Title: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Rusty Nails on September 08, 2005, 10:31:26 PM
You guys should try and write it in a more sonet-type of way. It rolls better on your tounge and sounds better in your head when you read it.

-Rusty Nails


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Revenant on October 28, 2006, 09:56:46 PM
Blasterdude, I want you to write lyrics for a song I wrote for my band! You have mad skills!


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on March 25, 2007, 08:37:37 PM
No, I don't. :P


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Gambini on February 04, 2008, 11:10:34 AM
Well i will try to translate a beautiful refrain from a song of my favorite band ®Heroes del silencio® (heroes of silence):

The words were wasps
and the streets like dunes
when I even hope to you to come
in a coffin i keep your tact
and a garland with your entangled hair
wanting to find an infinite rainbow

my hands that are even of bone
and your belly tastes to bread
the cathedral is your body
you was summer and thousand storms
and I the lion that smiles to the walls
that I have returned to paint of the same color

i not know distinguish between kisses and roots
i not know distinguish the complicated thing of simple,
and now you are in my list of promises to forget,
everything burns if apply the suitable spark to it

write with coal and in my thought
that we crossed oceans of time
drawing the pothooks of my fantasy
little it is as much when little you need

the fire, that was sometimes own
the always other people's ash
white sperm slipping by the dorsal spine
already we are but old and sincere
and that but it gives
if we watched the lagoon as they call to the eternity
of the absence.



(sublime)

---- I hope that you understand what i writes ----



Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: FreeFrag on October 22, 2008, 05:25:09 AM
Lyrics I wrote for the band I'm in.

March of the Drones

You can turn on your television
Find the end is coming near
Mankind is the sole disaster
That's all you'll ever hear

Doesn't matter what they're saying
Doesn't matter what they do
Just know that "big business"
Supresses all that is true


So the drones march on
Their will be done
And the drones march on
Until our hopes are gone


Go to church on Sunday morning
The preacher says we're in decay
Give your money, your life, your soul
To the unproven but righteous way

Uncited claims, one source for facts
Don't question what they say
Stick to the path of narrow minds
Pay your dues and be on your way


So the drones march on
His will be done
And the drones march on
Until our lives are gone


Now comes November and its polls
Vote with your heart, not your head
Which rights can you go without?
By whom do you want to be lead?

Vote one way, you're unAmerican
Vote another, you can't feel love
With choices this clearly absurd
I'll vote none of the above


So the drones march on
Their will be done
And the drones march on
Until our rights are gone


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Gambini on October 22, 2008, 05:32:00 AM
Well i will try to translate a beautiful refrain from a song of my favorite band ®Heroes del silencio® (heroes of silence):

The words were wasps
and the streets like dunes
when I even hope to you to come
in a coffin i keep your tact
and a garland with your entangled hair
wanting to find an infinite rainbow

my hands that are even of bone
and your belly tastes to bread
the cathedral is your body
you was summer and thousand storms
and I the lion that smiles to the walls
that I have returned to paint of the same color

i not know distinguish between kisses and roots
i not know distinguish the complicated thing of simple,
and now you are in my list of promises to forget,
everything burns if apply the suitable spark to it

write with coal and in my thought
that we crossed oceans of time
drawing the pothooks of my fantasy
little it is as much when little you need

the fire, that was sometimes own
the always other people's ash
white sperm slipping by the dorsal spine
already we are but old and sincere
and that but it gives
if we watched the lagoon as they call to the eternity
of the absence.



(sublime)

---- I hope that you understand what i writes ----



WTF!!!

I know that my english is still bad, but that was worse than bad!  ^_^


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: sea_eagles08 on July 08, 2009, 10:03:29 PM
This thread is dead lol so I thought I may post some of my lyrics. Warning you, they are very angry and bitter.

Next of kin
Means no one cares
I don't mind my flesh and blood
But it has no love for me
First born child means
Nothing to him
Eyes easy to decieve
Fly away like a fly
Don't really care about those eyes

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust

Time will tell
What his feelings are
I don't want his eyes to touch me
Not unlike my very own
Second born child means
Nothing to him
Mind easy to deceive
Disappear from the scene
Don't really care about those eyes

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust

My old man knows no bounds
Feelings towards him sour
In leaps and bounds
Away from reality
As no man knows
Why he shouldn't care
I don't mind
As long as he
Stays as far away as he can

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Why?
Why?
Why?
Oh Why?
Oh Why?
Oh Why?

I warned you guys. Very personal issues with my father. Wrote that when I was 15 (Yup, sure did) I remember the day well. I remember my mother telling me that I had a half-brother. His mother is the same woman whom pretty much ended that marriage, but I shall speak no more of my personal life. You people may say it's a bit harsh, but I was really, really pissed off that day lol.


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MSandt on July 08, 2009, 10:25:00 PM
Emo. So what if you have a half-brother?


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: sea_eagles08 on July 08, 2009, 10:32:22 PM
It's the same woman who my dad cheated on my mum with. It actually isn't about that particular event. I admit it was a very harsh thing to write lol, but 15 years old  ^_^ I remember being extremely moody back then, and very bitter towards him. Since then I have actually seen my Half-Bro and my dad and I am still annoyed with him but I guess I have learnt to move on (But back then... geeez lol)


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on July 08, 2009, 11:00:00 PM
Harsh? You should read our shining star thread called "Ramblings". I suppose the first pages would be the most interesting because then almost everyone here was a high school teenager who all had "problems".

So why do/did you hate your dad? Not just because he cheated on your mum, I hope, because I think that wouldn't be totally fair. Not that I'm saying HEY CHEATING AND ADULTERY IS AWESOME YOU SHOULD ALL DO IT but there certainly are circumstances in which it's.. excusable. (but I guess if you're the one being cheated on that would negatively cloud your judgement, I know mine would)

Or is it because he liked your half-brother better than you? Wouldn't that just make you a jealous whiny guy?


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: MSandt on July 08, 2009, 11:06:02 PM
My mom cheated on my dad and I couldn't give a shit.


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: sea_eagles08 on July 09, 2009, 11:35:59 AM
Well different people react to certain circumstances differently i guess. I wouldn't say I well and truly hated him. I think that I was confused at that age, because I hadn't seen him since I was 6. When I was 16-17 I think I began to just not care that I had a half brother lol. I just sort of moved on and just began to accept it. The older I got the more I seemed to understand, but when I was 13,14,15 I was a very unhappy person lol (not just due to him, but other issues as well) I would write very bitter songs about everything from school seeming like a dictatorship (Admit you have all had that thought before) to anyone who pissed me off (In this case my dad) and for some reason no sappy love songs. I do not think a became happier until about 16,17. I still think the world is depressing lol, but back then I thought the whole world was cruel (And listening to Nirvana and Alice In Chains never helped with that problem lol)


Title: Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
Post by: Sang on July 09, 2009, 06:03:57 PM
I would write very bitter songs [...] and [...] no sappy love songs.

This is a good thing. ;)