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« on: April 07, 2004, 03:45:59 AM »
Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
Forget the fury of anger, but let the temple bells ring.

Shine forth, the charms of sacred birds.
Shine back, the fields of enchanted herds.

Give the golden charms of the almighty quest.
and leave behind the bad, and keep the best.

PhenioX Sing!
Pheniox Sing!

Forget the fear of Pain, but feel the sacred, golden bird sing.
« Last Edit: April 08, 2004, 10:06:47 PM by Stephano_Lessa »
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« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2004, 03:50:08 AM »
Really Nice my friend ;) (y)  
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« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2004, 04:14:30 AM »
It is ok ........ when I close my eyes :D j/k
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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2004, 08:09:44 PM »
Nice! (y) both of them :D I'll post some of my own lyrics... sometimes ;)

One remark:

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You're not getting my attention (at all)

change that to: " you're not at all getting  my attention " :P
 
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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2004, 09:11:18 PM »
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2003-2004, Blaster :P

Blind I am to the world outside
Dumbly I sit, and dumbly I sigh
Begging to question the end of my life
Firmly I think and firmly I try

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see the light but am pained
It hates me
It hath me
It holds me
It loathes me

Resting beneath me it rattles its tail
Warning it gives and warning prevail
But not for long does last this tale
My body, it hurts and my body, it'll fail

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see light but I am pained
It hates me
It hath me
It holds me
It loathes me

And I tremble
And I shake
Hoping it's a dream
I try to wake
But to no avail
Does this curse lift
I'll avenge my death
I'll cause it a rift

Shanketh its head I do with sharp rod
The head, it will shake, the head, it will bob
The deed is now done and my heart quicker throbs
Wearily I bawl, wearily I sob

Losing my will
It nulls my fight
Losing my health
It grips me tight

Alone I am in darkness and in vain
I try to see light but I am pained
It hates me still
It hath me still
It holds me still
It silenced me
« Last Edit: April 07, 2004, 09:12:05 PM by BlasterDRP »
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« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2004, 10:00:09 PM »
I'll try to post mine here but they are way too sad and sick :S  
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« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2004, 10:10:37 PM »
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^ Just do it man :)
Seconded.
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« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2004, 10:17:19 PM »
Okay. One made by myself ;) :


I feel empty
I feel cold
I feel like I was frozen
for ages in the snow
Night makes me scared
it only makes me even more depressed
The wind is screaming out
I wanna shout real loud :
" I wanna leave forever
the other side must be better
than this one
because I feel so fucking alone
Tomorrow I'll be gone
I'll leave my world of sorrow
for once "
Death wants to give me her sytche
saying that I'll be fine
when I rip it off my spine
My rests will be consumed
by the wolves of night
because .. well ...
Can't you understand ?
I am already in Hell
« Last Edit: April 07, 2004, 10:17:55 PM by Stephano_Lessa »
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« Reply #8 on: April 07, 2004, 10:21:39 PM »
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Nice! (y) both of them :D I'll post some of my own lyrics... sometimes ;)

One remark:



change that to: " you're not at all getting  my attention " :P
Nope, we've tried that, but the boys who are writing the music for the song didn't agree with that sentence so we switched it back to (at all)[/i] :D (y)

EDIT Good lyrics Steph :)  
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« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2004, 11:22:29 PM »
Nice lyrics Steph and Rob! Damn I really like them, they should really be used somewhere, cause they sound really professional (also I know what you mean Highwire in both of them, such people annoy me too). Maybe I should also try and write something? :P
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« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2004, 11:39:02 PM »
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...cause they sound really professional...
Heh, thanks :) But don't worry... They ARE being used :D I just recieved the intro solo from the music writers :D  
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« Reply #11 on: April 07, 2004, 11:41:58 PM »
I have almost 20 texts like that on the go and don't know what to make with them but I am glad you liked it ;)  
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« Reply #12 on: April 08, 2004, 12:58:41 AM »
Dam they are nice (y)

 
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« Reply #13 on: April 08, 2004, 01:59:21 AM »
I started writing something, but it's a real crap, I think it would be better for me to write in Polish but then you guys won't understand it so I ust won't write untill I'll have some real inspiration :P
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« Reply #14 on: April 08, 2004, 02:38:48 AM »
^ same as me - I wrote reall good stuff but in polish .......
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