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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #165 on: October 22, 2008, 05:32:00 AM »
Well i will try to translate a beautiful refrain from a song of my favorite band ¨Heroes del silencio¨ (heroes of silence):

The words were wasps
and the streets like dunes
when I even hope to you to come
in a coffin i keep your tact
and a garland with your entangled hair
wanting to find an infinite rainbow

my hands that are even of bone
and your belly tastes to bread
the cathedral is your body
you was summer and thousand storms
and I the lion that smiles to the walls
that I have returned to paint of the same color

i not know distinguish between kisses and roots
i not know distinguish the complicated thing of simple,
and now you are in my list of promises to forget,
everything burns if apply the suitable spark to it

write with coal and in my thought
that we crossed oceans of time
drawing the pothooks of my fantasy
little it is as much when little you need

the fire, that was sometimes own
the always other people's ash
white sperm slipping by the dorsal spine
already we are but old and sincere
and that but it gives
if we watched the lagoon as they call to the eternity
of the absence.



(sublime)

---- I hope that you understand what i writes ----



WTF!!!

I know that my english is still bad, but that was worse than bad!  ^_^
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #166 on: July 08, 2009, 10:03:29 PM »
This thread is dead lol so I thought I may post some of my lyrics. Warning you, they are very angry and bitter.

Next of kin
Means no one cares
I don't mind my flesh and blood
But it has no love for me
First born child means
Nothing to him
Eyes easy to decieve
Fly away like a fly
Don't really care about those eyes

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust

Time will tell
What his feelings are
I don't want his eyes to touch me
Not unlike my very own
Second born child means
Nothing to him
Mind easy to deceive
Disappear from the scene
Don't really care about those eyes

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust

My old man knows no bounds
Feelings towards him sour
In leaps and bounds
Away from reality
As no man knows
Why he shouldn't care
I don't mind
As long as he
Stays as far away as he can

Every time I look into the mirror
I see my father staring at me
Empty, lifeless, grey, run down eyes
No way to comprehend
The feelings that I feel
Bones get scarred
And eyes turn to red
Limp and fragile blood
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Turns to dust
Why?
Why?
Why?
Oh Why?
Oh Why?
Oh Why?

I warned you guys. Very personal issues with my father. Wrote that when I was 15 (Yup, sure did) I remember the day well. I remember my mother telling me that I had a half-brother. His mother is the same woman whom pretty much ended that marriage, but I shall speak no more of my personal life. You people may say it's a bit harsh, but I was really, really pissed off that day lol.
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #167 on: July 08, 2009, 10:25:00 PM »
Emo. So what if you have a half-brother?
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #168 on: July 08, 2009, 10:32:22 PM »
It's the same woman who my dad cheated on my mum with. It actually isn't about that particular event. I admit it was a very harsh thing to write lol, but 15 years old  ^_^ I remember being extremely moody back then, and very bitter towards him. Since then I have actually seen my Half-Bro and my dad and I am still annoyed with him but I guess I have learnt to move on (But back then... geeez lol)
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #169 on: July 08, 2009, 11:00:00 PM »
Harsh? You should read our shining star thread called "Ramblings". I suppose the first pages would be the most interesting because then almost everyone here was a high school teenager who all had "problems".

So why do/did you hate your dad? Not just because he cheated on your mum, I hope, because I think that wouldn't be totally fair. Not that I'm saying HEY CHEATING AND ADULTERY IS AWESOME YOU SHOULD ALL DO IT but there certainly are circumstances in which it's.. excusable. (but I guess if you're the one being cheated on that would negatively cloud your judgement, I know mine would)

Or is it because he liked your half-brother better than you? Wouldn't that just make you a jealous whiny guy?
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #170 on: July 08, 2009, 11:06:02 PM »
My mom cheated on my dad and I couldn't give a shit.
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #171 on: July 09, 2009, 11:35:59 AM »
Well different people react to certain circumstances differently i guess. I wouldn't say I well and truly hated him. I think that I was confused at that age, because I hadn't seen him since I was 6. When I was 16-17 I think I began to just not care that I had a half brother lol. I just sort of moved on and just began to accept it. The older I got the more I seemed to understand, but when I was 13,14,15 I was a very unhappy person lol (not just due to him, but other issues as well) I would write very bitter songs about everything from school seeming like a dictatorship (Admit you have all had that thought before) to anyone who pissed me off (In this case my dad) and for some reason no sappy love songs. I do not think a became happier until about 16,17. I still think the world is depressing lol, but back then I thought the whole world was cruel (And listening to Nirvana and Alice In Chains never helped with that problem lol)
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Re: The Lyric and Poetry thread
« Reply #172 on: July 09, 2009, 06:03:57 PM »
I would write very bitter songs [...] and [...] no sappy love songs.

This is a good thing. ;)
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